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Re: Random Art 4

Postby Para-Chan on 2010-07-09 01:52

ROBOT : D

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Re: Random Art 4

Postby Borunksu on 2010-07-09 15:25

Haikus are awesome.
But sometimes they make no sense.
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Re: Random Art 4

Postby Para-Chan on 2010-07-09 16:55

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Re: Random Art 4

Postby Astorite on 2010-07-24 04:44

Whee, working on some logo ideas for my site/school portfolio class:

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Re: Random Art 4

Postby Tucker on 2010-07-27 13:13

I should quit going on hiatus..

As always, I've forsaken my fundamental studio roots and have gone digital video.

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Re: Random Art 4

Postby L33+Commando on 2010-08-11 23:34

Ey Tucker, once again, your video projects completely blow my mind, they're fantastic.
Polyphony Forum was wicked and I liked everything about it.
On the first one, I'm not sure whats intentional, but I think there are a few katakana spelling mistakes.
Hmm let's see...
Animation is normally spelled アニメション "a ni me sho n"
I'm not sure how you 'd go about spelling Polyphony Forum, but polygon is spelled with "po ri" like:  ポリゴン "po ri go n"
Although pa ri does sound more like "poly" to me so that might be okay.
phony depending on how you want it to be pronounced could be フォニ "fo ni" or ファニ "fa ni"
The katakana spelling for net forum is フォーラム "foo (fo-) ra mu"

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Re: Random Art 4

Postby Tucker on 2010-08-13 19:27

Oh no, by all means if I'm screwy on my Katakana call me on it. I've taken beginning classes, so scold me as my professor would. I need to get it right if I'm gonna survive across the ocean..

I suppose I'll post something besides video art this time.

http://www.benjaminpoynter.com/zodiac-f ... oceans.php

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Re: Random Art 4

Postby Seraph on 2010-08-13 20:28

I like the colors and textures you have going on in those, but there are a few things that bother me.

-The white on the edges of the pieces looks great, but it's distracting to me that it didn't ever really make it anywhere else on the prints except for the edges. It makes it feel like you couldn't bring yourself to cover up any of the information within the calendars because it was too sacred to you or something.

-Perhaps it was intended, but the first print, if it were in grayscale, would be one giant blob of gray. There's almost no contrast in it whatsoever. The other three prints do a better job alleviating that, but I feel perhaps the first one is the most important of the series, since it informs the viewer much more of your struggle than the other ones do. (well, except for the competing english and japanese month names)

-Finally, I am really not sure if you wanted a limited value range, because I know those can be used very well, but I wonder if you wouldn't try going back in and adding some darker values. We never really get outside of a 5/6 on a 10 scale value system, and I wonder if it wouldn't improve the pieces to give them some higher contrast and some really deep values in there.

Always glad to see things from you, though, Tucker. I keep telling my brother to be on the lookout for you because you'll be making some awesome things one day.
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Re: Random Art 4

Postby Tucker on 2010-08-15 07:55

That was incredibly useful, Seraph. Thanks!

The most glaring error I see in it is the first print versus the other three, and it makes me want to try the project again with a different medium or sorts. And yeah, I grayscaled them all too, and the first has little sharpness to it.
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Re: Random Art 4

Postby Morr on 2010-08-16 08:41

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Re: Random Art 4

Postby Nick on 2010-08-17 01:20

Morr wrote::f

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Re: Random Art 4

Postby Seraph on 2010-08-18 09:15

Morr wrote:[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/Morriperkele/steambot.jpg[img]

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Very cool, Morr.
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Re: Random Art 4

Postby Seraph on 2010-08-19 07:30

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Re: Random Art 4

Postby JBB on 2010-08-22 00:44

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testing to see if i can see it...
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Re: Random Art 4

Postby Tucker on 2010-08-29 12:36

And another one...

Polyphony Forum, 7 min
An influx of nostalgia create animated manifestations
of online-social activity. Where in, a forum member
dutifully embarks an electronica dreamland to avenge
a friend's banned account. 3-D + 8-BIT Animation.
http://vimeo.com/14413498
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Re: Random Art 4

Postby Tucker on 2010-08-29 12:37

edit : accidental double post
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Re: Random Art 4

Postby Astorite on 2010-08-30 07:09

For some reason, I really love the way you ended that, Tucker. Fun to watch. As far as critiques go, I'd say some things, like the cityscapes, could be reworked to provide a more solid grounding. I really like the 2-bit/3D clash going on, but in terms of polish/communication of ideas a more recognizable setup might connect with an audience better.

http://www.livingdazed.com/stuff/arcadi ... ale001.png
http://www.livingdazed.com/stuff/arcadi ... ale002.png
http://www.livingdazed.com/stuff/arcadi ... ale003.png

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Re: Random Art 4

Postby Astorite on 2010-09-01 01:49

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Re: Random Art 4

Postby Seraph on 2010-09-01 08:10

How did I miss the first post of the double post? Good to see you're still actively doing stuffs in WfA. I'm not going to lie, I don't keep up with any of that, or void anymore, but keep it up. : )

Haha, I want to see more of this Astoria story!
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Re: Random Art 4

Postby Tucker on 2010-09-02 05:49

Astoria's (beginning) tale makes me wonder if an entire short story can revolve around just waking up/leaving the bed in the morning..
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Re: Random Art 4

Postby JBB on 2010-09-02 06:37

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Re: Random Art 4

Postby Ninja on 2010-09-02 12:43

hahah! I took this: from the Scott Pilgrim game!

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and totally made this out of it!

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and a longer version.
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Re: Random Art 4

Postby Seraph on 2010-09-02 20:45

IT'S AWFUL.

Nice work, Ninja. : )
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Re: Random Art 4

Postby Otaku Dash on 2010-09-02 21:02

Nice work ninja =D

That reminds me I haven't done something related to pixel art in a long while... even though I suck at it I always liked how it flowed out.
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