by Seraph on 2010-08-13 20:28
I like the colors and textures you have going on in those, but there are a few things that bother me.
-The white on the edges of the pieces looks great, but it's distracting to me that it didn't ever really make it anywhere else on the prints except for the edges. It makes it feel like you couldn't bring yourself to cover up any of the information within the calendars because it was too sacred to you or something.
-Perhaps it was intended, but the first print, if it were in grayscale, would be one giant blob of gray. There's almost no contrast in it whatsoever. The other three prints do a better job alleviating that, but I feel perhaps the first one is the most important of the series, since it informs the viewer much more of your struggle than the other ones do. (well, except for the competing english and japanese month names)
-Finally, I am really not sure if you wanted a limited value range, because I know those can be used very well, but I wonder if you wouldn't try going back in and adding some darker values. We never really get outside of a 5/6 on a 10 scale value system, and I wonder if it wouldn't improve the pieces to give them some higher contrast and some really deep values in there.
Always glad to see things from you, though, Tucker. I keep telling my brother to be on the lookout for you because you'll be making some awesome things one day.


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